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you looked on me with
a caring smile
when everyoneelse just laughed.
You took me under your wing,
and we were wild.
You helped me off my feet,
taught me how to fly.
So i escaped,
I flew too high and too far.
Wore myself out and destroyed
everything i touched.
And I had the cheek to come back.
ask for your forgiveness.
And you gave it to me.
You took me under
your wing once more.
And are nursing me
back to health.
Your forgiveness means
everything to me.
I just hope i never forget it.
I hope i never forget the
bonds of friendship so strong in us,
I hope i never forget your
helpful hand
and saving grace.
I hope i never forget
your forgiveness
again.
©2005-2009 ~bluecarolina
:iconbluecarolina:

Author's Comments

this is about a girl who is soso important to me but for some reason i have never written about her before.
Somehow seems a bit like the story of the prodical son. ohwell.
written with love
but critique welcome!

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:iconfaded-blue-eyes:
awesome, i love it
xxxxx
:iconbluecarolina:
thank you :slow:
x x x

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the superhero in me has grown tired
:iconiwillbeback:
Sweet regret nicely written. :rose:

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Life is a one-way ticket on a runaway train.
:iconbluecarolina:
thank you
x x x

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the superhero in me has grown tired

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